The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates the number of
carbohydrates
, protein
and fat in the percentage of three groups.
Fix the agreement mistake
proteins
Overall
, it is noticeable that people are more likely to consume Carbohydrates
and Protein in all kinds of diets while
the opposite was true for Fat. A healthy diet
for the sport has both the lowest rate of Fat and the highest percentage of Carbohydrates
.
It can be clearly seen that Carbohydrates
have a higher proportion in the healthy diet
and the healthy diet
for sport, at 50% and 60% respectively whereas
the rate of fat is the lowest in the three diets. Fat has the same percentage in the average and healthy diet
.
Another noteworthy observation is that Carbohydrates
hit the highest points , at 60% while
the figure for Fat accounts for only a quarter, at 15% in the healthy diet
for sport . Also
, Fat has the same rate in the average and healthy diet
. In a healthy diet
, Carbohydrates
equal the total consumption of Protein and Fat.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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