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E-books and e-readers are extremely popular and considered by many to be better than the traditional paper book. Others claim that paper is the better option. Discuss both these points and give your own opinion.

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In today's ,trend most of them prefer reading
books
 online rather than choosing a conventional
way
 of reading paper
books
.
However
, I'm of the opinion that reading
books
 the archaic
way
 is better compared to that of
Internet
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 and I shall discuss both views in
this
 essay. Reading
books
 on the internet is more convenient for most of them as it is portable and you don't have to carry
books
 around
while
 you could access the same on your electronic devices.
Such
 availability of
books
 makes it easier for people travelling as you don't have to carry the weight of the
books
 around. The biggest drawback to
this
 is you spend more time on electronic devices as
it
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 harmful for your eyes
due to
 the emitting of blue light.
However
, in my ,
an
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opinion I prefer reading
books
 the traditional
way
 is
way
 more feasible as I love holding the book in my hand and feeling the pages of the book.
Moreover
, I prefer making notes in my
books
 and
also
 exchanging
books
 with my friends.
Overall
,
books
 should be read the traditional
way
 as they're easy to flip pages,
also
 limiting my exposure to electronic devices. Everyone should read
books
 the archaic
way
 as the internet has made it easy to access information
while
 reading the traditional
way
 provides you detailed access to information.
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