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E-books and e-readers are extremely popular and considered by many to be better than the traditional paper book. Others claim that paper is the better option. Discuss both these points and give your own opinion.

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In today's ,trend most of them prefer reading
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 and I shall discuss both views in
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 essay. Reading
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 on the internet is more convenient for most of them as it is portable and you don't have to carry
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 around
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 you could access the same on your electronic devices.
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 availability of
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 makes it easier for people travelling as you don't have to carry the weight of the
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 around. The biggest drawback to
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 harmful for your eyes
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 the emitting of blue light.
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opinion I prefer reading
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 the traditional
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 is
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 more feasible as I love holding the book in my hand and feeling the pages of the book.
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, I prefer making notes in my
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 exchanging
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 with my friends.
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,
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 should be read the traditional
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 as they're easy to flip pages,
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 limiting my exposure to electronic devices. Everyone should read
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 the archaic
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 as the internet has made it easy to access information
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 reading the traditional
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 provides you detailed access to information.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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