News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

TVs and
and
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newspapers
always present their press with some diagrams. Some individuals claim that these
pictures
are more impact than
the
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words.The diagrams and figures
are always increase
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the
understaniding
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understanding
of the
audiance
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audience
in
such
stories. I
am totally agree
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with
this
that the
pictures
worth more than the words.
First,
news
with out
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without
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visual
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in
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the
TV
would look like exactly these reports on the radio.
For example
, if the
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reporters
on the
TV
release the press
news
just by reading them it will
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resembles
resemble
that the radio
news
with just the difference would be that the
repoters
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reporters
face who is appearing on the
TV
.
For
this
reason, the
TV
would be boring and
and
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unrealistic as the
audiances
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audiences
audience
cant
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can
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confim
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confirm
the location and the extent of the
causualities
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casualties
causalities
for example
, so
images
could
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improve
the quality and reliability of the reports.
Second,
the
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newspapers
are
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have also required
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also
required some
images
and illustrations to look more
convinient
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convenient
and to make
it
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them
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easier to understand by the reader.
For instance
, if they were only texts
what
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is
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printed
on
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the journal it would be like the University books which
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not comfortable for anyone to read it. So, when there
is
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some
attaractive
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attractive
images
on the front page of the magazine it may increase the chances to buy it by the people
whith
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with
which
just eagerly needed to read the story behind those
pictures
while
the
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text only
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journals would be less attractive.
Finally
, the more the
images
appears
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on
the
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TV
and
newspapers
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in newspapers
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the more would be
more
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excited and increase the attention
by
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the
audiance
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audience
.
For instance
, Aljazeera and CNN are
arguabally
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arguably
the most watchable
TV
in the world
news
today and what makes them is that they report exactly
the
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what is
happining
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happening
on
vedios
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videos
and
images
that
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makes the report more reliable. In conclusion,
to print
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printing
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exciting
pictures
on
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in
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the
newspapers
and to present
with
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stories on
the
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TV
could be the ideal reporting
machanism
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mechanism
which can create more connection between the incidents' locations and the
audiances
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audiences
audience
.
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  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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