News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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always present their press with some diagrams. Some individuals claim that these

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unrealistic as the

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and illustrations to look more

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easier to understand by the reader.

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the journal it would be like the University books which

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on the front page of the magazine it may increase the chances to buy it by the people

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text only

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journals would be less attractive.

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excited and increase the attention

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in the world

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makes the report more reliable. In conclusion,

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exciting

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could be the ideal reporting

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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340 words

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

It is suggested that some countries give money to poorer countries rather than financial aid.

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is, in your opinion, the most important thing to succeed in life?

Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?