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The provided line graph gives data about emissions of
carbon
dioxide
per
person
in four countries namely Uk, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. The units are measured in metric tonnes.
Overall
, the quantity of
carbon
dioxide
per
person
in the Uk and Sweden had a dramatic decrease till the
end
of the
period
. It is
also
clear that the same
figure
in Italy and
portugal
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witnessed a significant decrease. In the Uk
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1967
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the
carbon
dioxide
emission per
person
was 11 and
this
had a
dramtic
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dramatic
decrease to 9 till the
end
of the
period
.
However
, it was
on
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the dominant position in the group. The same
figure
for Sweden was 9.
This
figure
rose till 1977 and reached a high of 11.
However
,
this
figure
from
this
period
decreased to 7 till 2007. The quantity of
carbon
dioxide
per
person
in Italy was just under
the
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5 and
this
share rose to 7 till the
end
of the span. The same share for Portugal
was
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1 and
this
figure
had a significant rise to 5 till the
end
of the
period
.
However
, was in the least position in the group.
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  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
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  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
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