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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line graph illustrates the
percentage
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 of the
population
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 over 65 between 1940 and 2040 in the three various countries.
Overall
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, there were substantial upward trends in the
percentage
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 of senior citizens above 65 in three developed countries. Another interesting point is that the
USA
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 had a higher
percentage
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 of old
people
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 in 1980, but in 2040, Japan will likely have dramatically grown more than others. In the beginning, the portion of
people
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 aged 65 and over in the
USA
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 noticeably rose during the first 40
years
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. After the peak moment in 1980, the
percentage
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 of the
USA
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 witnessed a gradual slump till 2018. Starting with 13 per
cent
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 in 2018 there was a remarkable increase, which is predicted that the
USA
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 will show 25 per
cent
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 of the aged
population
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 in 2040. Meanwhile,
Sweden
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 maintained the same level of old
people
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 in the first 20
years
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. As the
USA
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 dates,
Sweden
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 saw an unexpected growth till the 15 in 1980. After the short period of decrease, which lasted over 30
years
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, it witnessed a sharp increase to 20 per
cent
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. Nowadays the graph of
Sweden
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 demonstrates the drop, but it is predicted that the
percentage
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 of the old
population
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 in
Sweden
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 will overtake the
USA
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 in 2040. In the end, the share of aged 65
people
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 in Japan saw a considerable increase over the 20
years
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 and between 1960 and 1980 it stood at 3 per
cent
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.
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 the
percentage
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 of the old
population
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 in Japan witnessed a sharp growth to 10 per
cent
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. It is expected that the proportion of aged
people
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 will show a higher
rise
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 than others in 2040.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, usa, people, years, cent, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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