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Some governments say how many children a family can have in their home. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

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goverment
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government
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tax
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a tax
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government
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the goverment
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government
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transparent
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the cetizen
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citizen
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children
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children
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children
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family. we know taxes
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
, but it
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 logical because every family is not rich, so the
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government
 must think about how the poor family and whether the situation family is
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good or bad.
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first,
every
years
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population is increase deeply and every family always produces
children
. we know the
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government
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children
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house
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houses
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 every family but one family
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with
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from
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 the other family
because
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 the income or salary
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 the other family. so, if used taxes only
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children
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 think it is not
human
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a human
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 right.
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The goverment
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goverment
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government
 should be can help every family when they have many
children
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as
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free education, free living cost and free facilities for
children
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goverment
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government
want
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 to know about the total
children
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number of children
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every
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in every
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i
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 think the
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government
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made
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aplication
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application
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children
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the
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second,
the
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government
 must
responsible
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to
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another family
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other families
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 and protect the family. many do anything w do
that
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if the
goverment
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government
have
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 emphatic or help each other. in conclusion,
i
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 disagree because the
goverment
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government
give
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gives
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 many do anything to see the massive
children
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number of children
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 in a family and do not
used
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use
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