The chart gives information abour migration to the UK. The chart shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intented to stay in the UK. And the pir chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.

The chart gives information abour migration to the UK. The chart shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intented to stay in the UK. And the pir chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The chart illustrates the intended length of stay of people leaving for the
UK
during the period from 2000-2008,
while
the pie chart depicts the drivers leading to their migration percentage-wise in 2008.
Overall
, most immigrants had the intention of residing in the
UK
for up to 2
years
during the given
years
. And in 2008, the majority of them went to the
UK
for work purposes. During the mentioned time, the number of folks who chose to stay in Britain from 2 to 4
years
witnessed a gradual rise from 50,000 to 10,000 despite some minor fluctuations in between. The number of immigrants to Britain who lived there for 4 or more
years
remained stable at 150,000 people in the given period.
Although
the figure for the group with the intention of living in the
UK
for up to 2
years
dramatically levelled off from 150,000 to 250,000 from 2000 to 2004, it suddenly stayed unchanged from 2004-2008. Regarding the pie chart, the dominant reason for moving to Britain was working at 38%, followed closely by studying aim at 32%. Accompanying or Joining Family only made up for 16%, which was nearly equal to Other and No Reason Stated combined at 7% for each.
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