In the last 20 years, there have been significant developments in the field of information and technology, for example, the world wide web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree with this view.

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In the past two decades, in the field of IT
specially
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in the
world
wide
web
and communication by
email
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we have had significant developments.
However
, some people believe that these developments in information technology are likely to have more disadvantages than advantages in the future. But I completely disagree with
this
statement and
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this
essay is talked about the positive effect of IT
growth
. Developing
in
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the
world
wide
web
which is one of the aspects of IT
growth
has several benefits.
Firstly
, we have access to more information than in the past,
also
it takes less energy. Because we have all the information on the internet but before we had to go to libraries and find our more reliable sources.
Secondly
,
while
in the past it took more
time
to search, nowadays it can be done in a minute.
For example
, we can google something and in less than a minute we can access all sources. So, the
growth
of the
world
wide
web
leads to saving
time
and energy. Another aspect
in
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IT that has been developed, is communication by
email
. In the
past
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people had to communicate with each other by letter, but now thanks to
technology
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growth
we have another option which is emailing. By comparing
email
with
letter
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, emailing saves more
time
and makes people wait less
time
than before.
For instance
, If you want to send a letter to someone, it might take two weeks to get your answer,
however
,
this
time
for
email
it just takes less than a minute. In conclusion, the benefits of growing IT precisely in the
world
wide
web
and communication have more than its disadvantages.
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