The diagram below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

The graph is given today. How are you, my friend?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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The diagram below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

To what extent do you agree with the statement: "Governments should impose higher taxes on fast food to discourage unhealthy eating habits"?

Some people think that the modern communication technology is having negative effect on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

More and more young people are interested in finding out about their family background and history. What are the possible reasons? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people argue that if children behave badly, their parents should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behavior of their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Evil, wicked, spoiled.