With the development of modern transportation comes environmental problems. What possible solutions are there to these problems?
New advancements in automobiles have brought changes to the climate
as well as
to its surroundings. Innovations in transportation
often come with pros and cons that can be seen on a broader spectrum. problems often come along with
their solutions too. This
essay firmly explains both problem and solution.
we are living in 2023, this
modern era introduces new technology in transportation
almost every year, one of them is the bullet trains
, these fast and furious trains
can be seen mostly in the downtown of the city. Even though these humongous trains
are involved in massive traffic issues, but
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apply
also
in day-to-day hustle bustle
that ultimately disrupts the city's peaceful environment. Correct word choice
and bustle
From
the Change preposition
Over
last
decade
the number of accidents has Add a comma
,decade
also
increased significantly because these trains
were engaging a larger portion of the roadside in its
use. Correct pronoun usage
their
In addition
, it also
liberates hazardous gas on a daily basis polluting air purity and causing respiratory ailments to pedestrians. Moreover
, conservationist
have discovered that fuel combustion in these automobiles Fix the agreement mistake
conservationists
directly
responsible for greenhouse gases Add a missing verb
is directly
such
as CO2 etc. that are involved in absorbing excessive heat and making climate
hotter resulting in Correct article usage
the climate
depletion
of Correct article usage
the depletion
ozone
layer on a massive scale. Add an article
the ozone
Therefore
, overconsumption is causing more damage than providing benefits.
To eradicate these issues the government must take some legal actions by increasing the cost of one of the commodities such
as crude oil as a result
of which the affordability expense lowers the usage. Also
, mass transit should be halted at specific hours. For instance
, the legal authorities in Netherlands
have banned the usage of local Correct article usage
the Netherlands
transportation
for a short time consequently
, all the people were using another mode of transport like bicycles and carts, for their regular use making the country greener and more peaceful for living. This
way we can omit gas emissions and can control heat strokes. Hence
, strict policies need to be ineffective immediately.
In conclusion, modern transportation
shows massive concerns for environmental problems like greenhouse effects, but preventive measures can alter these affects
and can provide pronounced effects in future.Replace the word
effects
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...