You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am Apoorva Badola, your tenant residing
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178, Anne Street, Toronto. I rented your property in the January of
this
year, and I was promised a fully furnished apartment with almost new furniture.
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been 4 months since I moved in, and I am having trouble with some of
items
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provided. The mattress of the beds - in both
master
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bedroom and the guest bedroom - are poorly used and uneven. They are very uncomfortable to sleep in, and even cause
back-pain
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in the mornings.
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, the table in the kitchen is unstable
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and wobbles a lot. It is not appropriate for seating and having food. We would like you to visit the house and take a look at the furnishing.
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, please replace the mattress in the bedroom and fix the dining table. I am usually in the house after 3pm, so you can call before you come. Looking forward to
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back from you on the matter. Yours faithfully Apoorva
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