The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and the present. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and

the present.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The map illustrates the changes made in the present in comparison to Weymouth
village
in 1995.
Overall
, the
village
has experienced spectacular development
along with
the introduction of many facilities. It is vividly seen that in 1995 in the Southwest , the
direction
a number of shops were located.Across the
shops
Add a comma
,shops
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there was a fish market at walking distance from the fishing port.There was a hotel in the East
direction
while
in the Southeast corner of the
,
Remove the comma
apply
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village
there was a cafeMoreover,there was a farmland and forest park in the east
direction
. Probing ahead,the shops were replaced by restaurants which are located in the Southwest
direction
.The car park area is built near the hotel in the Southeast
direction
.
In addition
,the fish market is demolished and apartments have been constructed in the Southwest
direction
.
Furthermore
,in place of farmland and forest park,the golf and tennis area is introduced in the Reeymounth
village
in the East
direction
.

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