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The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and the present. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and the present. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The map illustrates the changes made in the present in comparison to Weymouth
village
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 in 1995.
Overall
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, the
village
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 has experienced spectacular development
along with
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 the introduction of many facilities. It is vividly seen that in 1995 in the Southwest , the
direction
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 a number of shops were located.Across the
shops
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,shops
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 there was a fish market at walking distance from the fishing port.There was a hotel in the East
direction
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while
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 in the Southeast corner of the
,
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village
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 there was a cafeMoreover,there was a farmland and forest park in the east
direction
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. Probing ahead,the shops were replaced by restaurants which are located in the Southwest
direction
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.The car park area is built near the hotel in the Southeast
direction
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.
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,the fish market is demolished and apartments have been constructed in the Southwest
direction
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.
Furthermore
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,in place of farmland and forest park,the golf and tennis area is introduced in the Reeymounth
village
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 in the East
direction
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, direction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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