The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.

The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. 

Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.
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The map below compares the layout of a town called Bridgetown in 1700 with it in 2000.
Overall
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, we can see that there were no alterations in the position of the bridge, marketplaces,and the
river
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.
However
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, the agricultural field was replaced by more and more buildings
as well as
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more modern facilities were constructed.
To begin
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with, the most noticeable change is that on the right side of the
river
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, the plants no longer existed
while
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a lot of buildings appeared.
It is clear that
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a railway which crosses the
river
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from southeast to northwest was built.
Moreover
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, the castle had been taken away and
this
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place was used to set up a school.
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, except for the original bridge, there was a new road next to it to cross the
river
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.
Finally
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, various facilities of Bridgetown were preserved well, including marketplaces, trees, rivers, and
also
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bridges.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • land use
  • expansion
  • transformation
  • modernization
  • industrial
  • recreational facilities
  • housing development
  • transportation networks
  • demolished
  • constructed
  • preserved
  • evolution
  • adaptation
  • architectural styles
  • cityscape
  • historical preservation
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