The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.
The map below compares the layout of a town called Bridgetown in 1700 with it in 2000.
Overall
, we can see that there were no alterations in the position of the bridge, marketplaces,and the Linking Words
river
. Use synonyms
However
, the agricultural field was replaced by more and more buildings Linking Words
as well as
more modern facilities were constructed.
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To begin
with, the most noticeable change is that on the right side of the Linking Words
river
, the plants no longer existed Use synonyms
while
a lot of buildings appeared. Linking Words
It is clear that
a railway which crosses the Linking Words
river
from southeast to northwest was built. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the castle had been taken away and Linking Words
this
place was used to set up a school. Linking Words
Additionally
, except for the original bridge, there was a new road next to it to cross the Linking Words
river
.
Use synonyms
Finally
, various facilities of Bridgetown were preserved well, including marketplaces, trees, rivers, and Linking Words
also
bridges.Linking Words
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