The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees.

The map illustrates the present industrial area and the proposed set-up for a new complex and employees’ accommodation.

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, the future development of the site shows major changes as more and more buildings will be erected, and farmland will be reduced to accommodate the houses. The first map shows the industrial area where the only building that can be seen is the factories

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and the roundabout in the middle. Up north, prior

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the vast farmland, is the river which stretched end to end.

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in the west part is the town.

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, the second picture depicts the future layout plan. As can be seen, the old structure was replaced with staff housing, with the new facility

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as the playground, school, shops, and medical centre. A the same location

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is the town and roundabout which on each side has a road in all directions with a smaller version down south. It's

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noteworthy to see the bridge up straight north which crossed the river with another housing which cause the reduction of the farmland size.