You and your colleagues want to use a company room. Write a letter to your manager and ask for permission. In your letter. Explain why you need the room. Describe which room you need and why. Tell what changes you'll need in the room.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to take
permission for the Company's room that I use for my data engineering project.
Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and Verb problem
get
working
in the data science department of your corporation. I want room for my new strategy, Wrong verb form
I work
this
task is handled by me and my team members. So, I should need a peaceful environment to complete the work.
Furthermore
, I want a company's second-floor room that is
fully furnished with modern equipment. We can do our activity with full concentration and without facing any problems related to noise as well as
lack of material. That is
why, we have to need a company place.
Moreover
, all the necessary things are available there instead
of a few things that should be changed in this
area like the projected screen and meeting table, during the explanation of the deal we have to need a modern projector because the old one is very small in size. All in all, the meeting table set has only 4 chairs, we ought to need a maximum of 10 chairs set.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Eva Smith.Submitted by rajveersra55 on
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task response
Ensure that the response addresses all aspects of the task, such as the specific need for the room, the type of room required, and the changes needed in the room.
coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing the ideas in a logical and coherent manner to improve overall coherence and cohesion. Use transitional words and phrases to connect ideas more effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite