The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
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The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated IT and
Service
Industry
in the UK from 1992 to 2000. It is measured in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of
GDP
, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout
this
time. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the
Service
Industry
accounted for 4 per
cent
of
GDP
,
whereas
IT exceeded
this
, at just over 6 per
cent
. Over the next four years, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8 per
cent
. IT was still higher
overall
, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
However
, over the following four years, the patterns of the two components were noticeably different. The percentage of
GDP
from IT increased quite sharply to 12 in 1998 and
then
nearly 15 in 2000,
while
the
Service
Industry
stayed nearly the same, increasing to only 8 per
cent
.
At the end
of the period, the percentage of
GDP
from IT was almost twice that of the
Service
Industry
.
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