The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The table depicts the data of
employees
numbers along with
factories which produce silk in England and Wales Within a time span of ten years
, commencing from 1851 till 1901,
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of female employees
were
generally higher than men Change the verb form
was
employees
number, as well as
the drop in employees
numbers in both gender over the years
,
Glancing at the table reveals a gradual downfall from 1851 to 1901of operators numbers in both male and female genders , it’s illustrated by 76,786 employees
in 1851 fell to 25, 527 in 1901, in the contrast, 53,964 operator’s ratio in 1851 palpitated to 13,375 employees
in 1901, but the proportion of women was throughout the years
higher than men proportion, in the meanwhile, the number of factories had grown rapidly from 272 factories to 761 in just 10 years
, exactly between 1851 and 1851, but, it registered a moderate drop and fall till the early of 19th,Submitted by creativedesign1a9 on
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