In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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It is irrefutable fact that in

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modern era, an increasing number of more and more humans believe that in some countries traditional

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is being replaced by international fast

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has adverse effects on families , individuals and society . Many individuals hold different beliefs about it. Personally l definitely with the above-expressed statement and there are many compelling reasons to support my view. In

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following essay, l intend two reasons for

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. First and foremost, one of the main advantages is that in a lot of countries' traditional

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is being replaced by international fast

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is the reason, it is very easy and

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to prepare fast

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. It is a very useful way for workers and students . Because it helps them to reduce time .

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reason, these days fast

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is very well-known in the whole world rather than traditional

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why , many humans prefer to eat

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kind of

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, moving it should be noted that everything has its merits and demerits.

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reason, it has some drawbacks. From my point of view, if

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method becomes widespread various harmful diseases appear in human health .

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, it causes weight gain . Because it has a lot of harmful ingredients .

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, family gatherings will decrease .

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, it causes a decrease in affection in families .Malnutrition has a negative impact on the family

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on society. By way of my conclusion, l once again reaffirm my position.

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to say, it has some demerits and merits to eating fast

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of traditional

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