In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that government should

increase

the

tax

on fast

food

items

because these are causing

health

problems

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most people in some areas. I completely agree with the statement. There are a number of reasons I believe

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food

has detrimental effects on our

body

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. One possible reason is

that

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obesity is one of them. As

this

food

has high protein and

calorie

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, they are lately burned by our

body

.

As a result

, it creates

a

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fat and damages our

body

shape. Another reason is that heart

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and pressure can be caused for adopting

this

food

.

Moreover

,

this

food

contains harmful chemicals which will affect our blood circulation and

then

will cause those diseases.

Finally

, it harms our capability of

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antibiotics.

The fast

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food

has a plethora of dangerous elements which

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to fight against bacteria and

it

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will cause death in future.

For example

, the Daily Star newspaper published that 70%

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and students caused various

type

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of

health

problems

because they addicted to fast

food

items

such

ad

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pizza,

burger

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burgers

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etc which are easy to take and responsible price.

However

, my opinion is that

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the

authorities should

increase

the

tax

on

the

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process

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food

. First of all, if government

increase

the

tax

on

this

food

, people will avoid

to buy

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it and will take

home made

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foods which are healthy and good for our life.

Secondly

,

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seller

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sellers

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will decrease the sales of fast

food

items

because the price of elements will

increase

which are

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in fast

food

cuisines.

For instance

, the city of Agra which is situated in India

,

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has increased the price of fast

food

because of

the

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government instructions and

then

most fast

food's

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food

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shop sellers are moving the cuisine of vegetables and fruits

items

shop

instead

of fast

food

items

.

Therefore

,

health

problems

issue on that country

are

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are

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dropping day by day. In conclusion, considering the factors discussed

about

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. I believe if the administration takes some strict steps about it

such

as higher

tax

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taxes

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, will solve people's

health

problems

with

outstanding

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result

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.