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The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts the drinking lifestyle of Australian citizens in recent 4 weeks in five different cities, namely
Sydney
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, Melbourne, Brisban,
Adelaide
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 and Hobart. At first glance, it is recognizable that
overall
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, heading to a cafe for a cappuccino or tea was the most popular habit among the people in these cities,
whereas
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, the purchase of fresh
coffee
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 was their less common activity. Looking at the data in more detail, more than 62% of Hobart's dwellers
as well as
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 Melbourne's visited a cafe to drink their favourite beverage either tea or espresso,
in contrast
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, they are followed by the citizens of
Sydney
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, Brisbon and
Adelaide
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, who accounted for 60%, almost 55% and 40% of the consumption of these items at the cafe respectively.
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, there was a tie in the number of people in Hobart and Brisban, with gradually above 50% of them purchasing immediate espresso, in the meantime, 50% of
Adelaide
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's inhabitants copied
this
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 habit, whilst, 45% of people in
Sydney
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 bought quick
coffee
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.
However
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, regarding the attainment of fresh
coffee
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, the consumers in
Sydney
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 and Melbourne had the same ratio of the population buying fresh
coffee
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, whilst, a tie rate of citizens consuming
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 type of caffeine was observed in
Adelaide
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 and Brisban.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, adelaide, coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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