You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazine. In your letter •Correct the information in the article. •Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. •Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir/Madam I hope
this
email finds you well, I am writing to you about information
about the history of Baghdad
. While
you published in your international travel magazine on the date 8th of April 2023. Whereas
you have written that Baghdad
was built by Ahmed Ali, but indeed, it was built by Hrone AL-Rhshed. Furthermore
, you added the wrong information
about the date you have written Baghdad
was established in 1550. It was in 1445. This
information
is extremely important for the confidence of your company because this
information
is easy for everyone who can search on the website. Moreover
, people will have a good idea about your company if they find the right information
about Baghdad
. You can easily find this
information
on WWW.HOSTORYOFBAGHAGDAD.IQ. This
website is officially from the Iraqi government. I hope you correct this
information
as soon as possible, I look to
hearing from you, Best Wishes, HishamRephrase
forward to
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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