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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These three pie charts illustrate how much
sodium
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, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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 content in four types of meals. Namely, in
breakfast
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, lunch,
dinner
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, and
snacks
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. At the first glance,
dinner
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 has the highest content of
sodium
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 and saturated fat,
while
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snacks
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 have a majority of
sugar
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.
On the contrary
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, the smallest percentage of nutrients is found consistently in
breakfast
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. When we look at the data in detail, saturated fat and
sodium
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 portion are almost identical across four meals. For saturated fats number, the largest is at
dinner
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 with 43%, followed by lunch with 35%, 26% in
snacks
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, and
breakfast
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 as lowest as 16% ,
meanwhile
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sodium
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 levels only differed in the
snacks
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 and
breakfast
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 categories. They have the exact same value of 14%.
Moreover
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, added
sugar
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 chart has the most contrast profile. As stated before,
snacks
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 have the biggest content of
sugar
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 as high as 42%,
then
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 it is 23% at
dinner
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, 19% at lunch and at
breakfast
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 only amount to 16%. In conclusion, they are different amounts of
sodium
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, fat, and
sugar
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 in four meals.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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