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Some people think that children should only read academic books. Others believe that reading books for pleasure is equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people are adamant that offspring should only read
an academic records
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academic records
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,
although
 others think that reading report for entertainment is equally significant. In my opinion, I believe that academic
books
 for reading are paramount,
nevertheless
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 fiction
books
 are equally necessary too. On the one hand, academic
books
 have an inevitable place in
children
’s life. Thanks to academic
books
children
 enlarge their world outlook and become well-developed students, which affects their school achievements directly.
Moreover
, continuous reading of academic
books
 may provide them with theoretically needed information about the environment, math, engineering and etc.
On the other hand
,fiction literature is equally vital for self-development, to recognize and conceive all materials deeply. Reading for pleasure gives additional spiritual power to
children
 and absorbs all the detailed information in the article.
In addition
, reading for pleasure instructs
children
 to execute all known information into practice, which allows them to overcome obstacles easily. I strongly believe that reading academic
books
 increase the scientific level of
children
, at the same time reading for pleasure is paramount of importance. Reading in an academic sphere may develop
children
 one-sided, which is not enough to compete in today’s world.
As a result
 , reading on both sides up-bring
children
 as completed and ready for heavy examines in life. In conclusion, I accept the importance of academic
books
,
although
 I strongly advise adding
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them for
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for
Change preposition
to
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children
’s library fiction
books
 to encourage them to fantasy all their educational materials and pass easily all their home-works and university life difficulties.
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