The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
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The two give maps show the change that has taken place on the access highway to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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, it is evident that there has been a lot of development on the access expressway leading to the hospital. The most significant changes were the introduction of a roundabout and a bus station. In 2007, the hospital line had a number of bus stops on each side of the street, there were all demolished in 2010. In 2010 there has been the construction of a bus station on the west side of the roadway connected to two roundabouts at each end of the pathway which was
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a new introduction. The large car park which was for both staff and the public was reduced in size and was assigned to only staff members of the hospital.
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, to the east of the hospital, there was a creation of a big car park for the public which was connected to the hospital by a new entrance developed. The entrance from the old car park in 2007 was main in 2010 so as the ring road to the north of the hospital and the city road to the south of the hospital.
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