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In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Food
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 which we had as traditional type is now being vanished by international fast
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 in many regions.
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, it becomes a major problem for families, people and the public. I strongly agree with
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 notion of the replacement of usual
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 with fast
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 leads to some effects on all individuals.
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, it
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 requires a balanced diet to maintain good
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, On preparing home
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 will have all kinds of nutrients with good taste. We can stay healthy
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 having the prepared
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 and we can have it
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 families where we will spend some quality time with them. Different country foods pattern will get vary from our foods and it won't be suited for many elders in the family but it will be tastier comparatively and it leads serious cause to the people's
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, Preservatives like many
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 chemicals has added to fast
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 for taste and to attract the younger generation.
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, As we started to have fast
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 as a meal in countries like USA, UK, etc . As per the WHO record, the regions who is having that kind of
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 will be at the top of the record across the globe. Even children are suffered from many issues at an early stage because cooking time-consuming humans in some communities are preferring and like to have fast
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 as a meal to make it simpler but not healthy. In summary, I would concede that
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 Eating a meal is very important in our life to have better growth in the body , happiness and
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. Having
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 as fast meal is not good for our
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 and the Government should ban some unhealthy preservatives so that we can prevent some diseases in future.
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