The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flow chart shows the steps involved in the production of cup
noodles
for the industry.
Overall
, the whole procedure for producing noodles
entails eight steps, starting with storing the raw material and culminating with labelling and sealing the noodles
. This
process requires plenty of specific equipment such
as mixers and rollers.
First of all, noodle production begins storing the raw material, namely flour in storage silos. The next step,
involves mixing flour with additional materials Remove the comma
apply
that
is
added to the flour, which Change the verb form
are
is
water and oil in a mixer. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Then
, once they are mixed, it produces dough sheets that must be rolled by the rollers before being stripped. After that, the dough sheets are strapped by a particular piece of equipment, before being moulded into a disc shape. In the following steps, the noodle discs is
cooked with oil and dried. Change the verb form
are
Then
, the drying noodles
must be stored in cups before being added with vegetables and spices. Finally
, the stage ends culminating the cups with labelling and sealing.Submitted by mdelvega90 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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