The map given below shows the plan for reconstruction of the second floor of Mason's Building. Summarize.
The map provides the architectural
layout
plan
for the rebuilding of the second floor by constructing with a few additional changes.
Previously, the constructed layout
was bifurcated into different portions of the house but the current plan
is curated to provide more space and accommodate guests. The old plan
consisted of a kitchen along with
a dining area and living room, while
it also
included two small bedrooms and one spacious bedroom
.
In the new layout
plan
, the kitchen is replaced as a master bedroom
, the spacious bedroom
is made into a guest room, and the bedroom
on the southeast corner is now the studio storage, while
the other bedroom
on the northwest corner is the laundry room. The dining area is now the studio seating,
and the living area is the studio.
Remove the comma
apply
Overall
, the rooms have been used for different purposes through the layout
plan
has remained the same. Few changes have been made to the stair landing and the bathroom remains as it is.Submitted by reddy_sowmya8110 on
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