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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think the advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is a possibility that in the future humanity will speak the same
language
. There has been a lot of debate going on about the positives and the negatives of
this
 matter. In
this
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 I will be giving my opinion on whether the advantages of having only
one
language
 outweigh the disadvantages of
this
 probability. The negative side of having a universal
language
 is losing big parts of heritage from a lot of different places all over the world.
Language
 is an important part of a culture. It is a very unique feature that can tell a lot about the people that use it.
For example
, expressions and mannerisms often can be a reflection of events that the speaker's ancestors
had
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faced.
This
 can be helpful not even for research purposes but can help
one
 reunite with their homeland,
cultural
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and cultural
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 roots or help to understand their national identity,
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 more comfortable in their own skin.
Also
,
one
 more argument why variety speeches is a positive thing is that learning a new
language
 can be a great way to exercise
one
's brain which can expand
one
's worldview, especially around the topic of cultural diversity, improve
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memory, concentration and listening skills. Learning a new way of expression can be an interesting hobby or a dream for quite a few people around the globe.
On the other hand
, having
one
language
 universally would make communicating much easier and quicker and the spare time could be used to learn some other skill. All in all, I think that the variety of different speeches and
its
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 positive sides do not fall behind having
one
 universal
language
. Diversity is beautiful and in
this
 day and
age
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 I believe we should treasure our
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as well as
 others' way of speaking.
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