The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates the three different active models
about
purchasing Change preposition
for
cafe
and tea in terms of the percentages of citizens in five Australian Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
cities
: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall
, going to a cafe
’ for coffee and tea is the most orient
in every Replace the word
oriented
cities
given except Adelaide. In opposite, drinking instant Change to a singular noun
city
coffees
is the less popular option in these five Fix the agreement mistake
coffee
cities
.
It is clear that
the
Melbourne’s citizens have the greatest proportion Correct article usage
apply
in
visiting Change preposition
of
cafe
shops to buy beverages, approximately 63%. Almost every city have
more than half Correct subject-verb agreement
has
residents
will go to Change preposition
of residents
cafe
stores in last
four weeks, but not the case in Adelaide. About 49% Correct article usage
the last
people
go to Change preposition
of people
cafe
shops there, underneath
Change preposition
under
the
half, which is the lowest ratio in these five Correct article usage
apply
cities
.
By contrast
, taking fresh coffees
in Fix the agreement mistake
coffee
last
four weeks is unusual in every Correct article usage
the last
cities
Change to a singular noun
city
espically
in Brisbane, which has less than 35% Correct your spelling
especially
citizens
, the lowest rate, Change preposition
of citizens
to
do that. There is a negative relation between buying fresh Fix the infinitive
apply
cafe
and instant Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
cafe
. The Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
cities
which have a ratio below 40%( Brisbane, Adelaido
, and Hobart) to drink fresh Correct your spelling
Adelaide
cafe
have a Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
relative
bigger percentage of people Replace the word
relatively
to
have Fix the infinitive
apply
instant
Add an article
an instant
cafe
, more than 50%. And the opposite situation Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
happen
in Sydney and Melbourne.Change the verb form
happens
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