Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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should start their

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at a very early age, the rest disagree and say that they should begin at least 7 years old.

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essay will discuss the statement, I partly agree

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give my opinion. On the one hand,

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should start learning early. Because

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is when the brain develops, the acquisition is very fast and the agility,

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make them smart from a young age. At school,

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study

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to speak, sing,

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draw, read poetry,

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stories,...those activities are good

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stimulating

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’s intellectual development. In addition, the period from 2 to 2.5 years old is the most important period,

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the most sensitive to language throughout life. Because early access will help them explore and learn many different languages at the same

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help

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develop their brains in the best way.

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, if you give them contact with English when they are young, they will acquire foreign languages naturally

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of passively like

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,

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will learn quickly and easily absorb the knowledge that native teachers teach them.

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should begin to

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at least 7 years old because

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is the period when they develop in the arms of

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who go to school early will not be able to adapt to the environment with many strangers and away from their parents, leading to their refusal to

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and cry more. At kindergarten school, the teacher often teaches

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about math. At

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stage just get used to the numbers.

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if you force a child to do math early on, they will be stressed and irritable In conclusion, I think

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should begin to

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languages like English at a very early age. Because English is very beneficial and used all over the world.