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happiness is considered very important in life. Some people think happiness is difficult to define. What factors are important in achieving happiness.

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People
 consider that happiness must be
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a part of their life. Some
people
 assume that they feel difficulty in having
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happiness
. By achieving happiness,
people
 would feel pleasure in doing anything and it could trigger their motivation to do a new thing and they would be healthier. In
this
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more
on
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below. If
people
 feel delighted, they tend to be more creative . It is because they could motivate themselves to create something new.
For example
, many
people
 who contribute
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 an invention would feel
enjoyable
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doing that. It is because they have
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 spirit to do more, even if they have failed in a process.
In addition
, some
people
 who work as an influencer should
mantain
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 their feeling because they would not be attractive
infront
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in front
 of
people
 if there is a bad
feeling
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 them. It is caused by the influencer must be able to interact well
to
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 the audience and create an interactive situation. Having a
pleasure
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 feeling should be an important thing of it.
Moreover
, having a
joy
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 feeling could help
people
 to avoid
stress
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 that could affect their health condition. It would be a detrimental effect later on because it could lead to
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mental health that might be a danger
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productivity
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 of work.
Furthermore
, if
people
mantain
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maintain
 their happiness, they would avoid being old earlier.
This
 would affect their
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 because they seem
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 a good appearance, particularly their face. In conclusion, having a happy feeling has some benefits regarding productivity, creativity, and
also
 health.
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