The diagram below shows the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2004.
The diagram illustrates the overview of a
school
before and after the plan to change it between years
2004 and 2024.
Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, it is clear that
there are more students and a new building in 2024 compared to the amount
of students in 2004. In ,addition there are Change the quantifier
number
also
some changes on the road out of school
composing.
As it is given it is planned that 1000 more students will be at school
in 2024 so there will be a third school
building on the west side instead
of the sports field, than
the sports ground moves to the opposite Correct your spelling
then
site
on the south of the campus, there is Correct your spelling
side
also
a new car park beside the building number 3 at the end
.
Another change will be on the way to building number 1 and 2, there will be a new connective path between these two old buildings, as it is visible the structure of the main road to the school
will also
be different in the new plan but there will not be any changes on the number of trees.Submitted by asgharrrlashkariii on
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