Write a letter to the organizer of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter with
regards
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to the DogSpot fest I attended
last
year in Toronto in the month of February. First of all, I would like to
congratualte
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congratulate
you
for
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the
huges
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huge
success of the event. I would
also
like to appreciate the arrangements made. Despite a huge gathering, the crowd was
well managed
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by the volunteers and
thr
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the
organizing committee.
Also
, the panel discussion was very informative for pet parents. I am a dog trainer by profession, and I would like to participate as a volunteer in the next planned festival. I can help deliver sessions on dog training for
fist-time
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pet parents. I can
also
help you connect with large media companies who could cover the fest in leading newspapers and help us gain
the
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visibility.
Lastly
, I had
few
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question
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listed below regarding the event: - How and when was the first DogSpot show hosted? - Do you
also
organize
this
event in any other city other than Toronto? - What is the ultimate goal for DogSpot in future? Looking forward to hearing back from you on the questions. Yours faithfully Apoorva
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