The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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This
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bar chart illustrates information about the
number
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of males and females in
further
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education that study full or part-time in Britain in three different periods of time.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in all three ,terms women experienced an upward trend.
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the data from the bar ,chart it can be noticed that men's part-time education is declining. In the first term there are 1000 men
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this
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sum dropped to 160. In the
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,term
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number
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rose to make it a total of 900
students
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.
In addition
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, amount of
students
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that were studying full-time only increased. At the beginning it was only 100
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in the middle it rose to 50
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then
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in the final year
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statistic became 250
students
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. As can be seen from the chart at the start the
number
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of women that were educated full time was 50
students
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even though in the next year term
number
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of females increased rapidly making it 200 and
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it stopped at 240
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • engaged in
  • distinct
  • categorizes
  • enrollment status
  • surpass
  • compared to
  • stability
  • increased significantly
  • equal number
  • gap
  • outnumber
  • decreased
  • part-time courses
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