some people believe that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that most respiratory problems come from
pollution
. While
I accept that to prevent illnesses
and diseases
authority
should focus on reducing Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
pollution
, I strongly believe that there are much better ways to keep people
being
infected.
As we live in urbanization, everyone can see Change preposition
from being
construction
of premises in every Add an article
the construction
parts
of the world, and it has adverse Change to a singular noun
part
effect
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effects
for
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on
quality
of air Add an article
the quality
as well as
water contamination. First and foremost, government
should reduce Add an article
the government
construction
of buildings in order to improve Add an article
the construction
quality
of air and water. Correct article usage
the quality
Furthermore
, poor quality of air and water is a
root of Correct article usage
the
diseases
and illnesses
related to gut
and lungs. Correct article usage
the gut
For example
, factories produced toxic gases which eroded ozone
layer and pollute Correct article usage
the ozone
atmosphere
, if Correct article usage
the atmosphere
government
would able to cut Add an article
the government
construction
of amenities and Correct article usage
the construction
production
of toxins, it helps to enhance our nature and environment, and it Correct article usage
the production
lead
to change for the better.
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On the other hand
, there quite
a lot of fundamental methods to prevent Add a missing verb
are quite
diseases
and illnesses
, and improve overall
health of citizens. One way is Add an article
the overall
informing
individuals about current Change the verb form
to inform
diseases
, and they can take steps. Take as an example Covid-19, this
disease emerged on purpose and it is not came
from Wrong verb form
come
pollution
or housing problems. Ministry organization arranged awareness events, and warned about dangers
of Correct article usage
the dangers
this
disease on social media and on TV such
as "stay at home" and "quarantine". The second way is allocating money on
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to
pharmacy
and for Fix the agreement mistake
pharmacies
construction
of gyms so that Correct article usage
the construction
people
can take benefits. For instance
, by improving vaccines and building fitness areas people
can improve their general health.
In conclusion, focusing on decreasing pollution
and construction
issues is one of the decent methods to prevent spreading
of Correct article usage
the spreading
diseases
and illnesses
, while
there are more virtuous ways to keep people
being
infected.Change preposition
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