The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
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The given diagrams compare some changes in a museum in different years: 1990 and 2010. In general, the conversion of the cottage into a coffee
shop
, and the expansion of the carpark were noticeable during
this
20-year period. Looking at the first map for more detail, the museum was located on the north side of the main road, which was connected to a path. The museum's facilities were divided via
this
path, and in the north of
this
location was a green area. On the right side, a car park was located in the north of a small garden. Meanwhile, through an entrance, there was a storeroom which was opposite a
shop
. A cottage which was built in
this
main section was situated nearby the main road. After a 20-year period, several changes had taken place. The car park witnessed an expansion and replaced a smaller garden one. In the main building,
while
the storeroom was maintained until 2010, the
shop
was extended almost triple to the left side.
Besides
, the cottage was converted into a new coffee
shop
during
this
period.
Otherwise
, the path and the northern garden still remained unchanged.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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