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Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement
The number of
waste
products
 generated from homes is still becoming small and the government regulations to give it a legal requirement is considered to increase the
product
. I personally agree towards
this
 statement to some extent which I will elaborate more on below. On the one hand, If the government regulate that
waste
product
 is legalized, it would support
people
 to be aware towards recycling
product
. They
have
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a
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benefit from
this
 action because much
waste
 stuff resulted from home could be recycled into
a functional
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a functional product
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products
,
such
 as plastic material which could be recycled to be a mug
,
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 or plate.
Such
products
 could be sold to the store and could be income for society.
On the other hand
, having a legal requirement from the government does not mean society would consider it
as
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a good aspect to follow. To
this
 condition, the program to increase recycling
products
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of products
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 from home could not be realized well.
For example
, some
people
 who are strict about the environment tend to choose the
product
 that they consume that
have
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has
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 a little chemical contains.
Furthermore
,
people
 do not feel that they should use the
product
 which could be recycled and every
product
 that they usually choose randomly in
market
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;
therefore
, there is no impact on the
people
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 choice towards the
product
 which
have
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has
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a
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the
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 potential to be recycled because they do not concern
of
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about
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 it. In conclusion, It seems to me that the legalization of
waste
product
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products
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 is a good action to support
people
 to increase the recycling
product
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of product
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.
However
, there are some
people
concern
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concerned
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 about the environment
which
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and
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 would not choose a recycling
product
.
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