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Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The number of
waste
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products
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 generated from homes is still becoming small and the government regulations to give it a legal requirement is considered to increase the
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. I personally agree towards
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 statement to some extent which I will elaborate more on below. On the one hand, If the government regulate that
waste
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product
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 is legalized, it would support
people
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 to be aware towards recycling
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. They
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a
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benefit from
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 action because much
waste
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 stuff resulted from home could be recycled into
a functional
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a functional product
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products
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,
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 as plastic material which could be recycled to be a mug
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 or plate.
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 could be sold to the store and could be income for society.
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, having a legal requirement from the government does not mean society would consider it
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a good aspect to follow. To
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 condition, the program to increase recycling
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products
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 from home could not be realized well.
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, some
people
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 who are strict about the environment tend to choose the
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 that they consume that
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 a little chemical contains.
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,
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 do not feel that they should use the
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 which could be recycled and every
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 that they usually choose randomly in
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;
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, there is no impact on the
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people
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 choice towards the
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 which
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a
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 potential to be recycled because they do not concern
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 it. In conclusion, It seems to me that the legalization of
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product
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products
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 is a good action to support
people
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 to increase the recycling
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product
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of product
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.
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, there are some
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concern
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 about the environment
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 would not choose a recycling
product
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.
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