Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

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others believe that each type

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should have the same level of

punishment

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, others argue that it

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only about the

crime

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itself

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but

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about the reason

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committing it.

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essay discusses whether it

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to give a fixed sentence

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conviction for each type of

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or

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the

circumstances

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before the judge, and

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I will give my opinion. On

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side of

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there are people who argue that it would be better if the ones who are responsible for the judgment to choose

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typical

punishment

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for

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type of

crime

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, despite the

circumstances

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of it.

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, some people

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that if there was a situation ,whether it is a normal argument or a huge

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leading to death, leads someone to kill the other to defend themselves against the danger, that they should have the same

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.

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, the people who believe in

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opinion claim that it will be easier for the judge to know immediately the right judgment.

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, there is plenty of evidence in the real world that

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how important to know the whole situation and motivations for the

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before taking the

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,Because it is hard to give the same judgment

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a person who

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the other life just to defend himself from a simple threat that he might be wrong about or an individual who killed the other

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because he was under attack.That’s

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it

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for the judge to take all the

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consideration , as I mentioned in the earlier example , the

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who just kill the other for

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a normal argument just because he did not

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safe does not equal the huge threat of who was under

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attack from a dangerous interaction .

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, I believe arguments have their merits. On balance ,

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, the second opinion was better by taking the

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consideration, which

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moral equivalency and

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result

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that prevents

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injustice to be brought against the victims.