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Many work people today work at home rather than in an office. Are there more advantages to working remotely than disadvantages?

#work #people #home #office
Increasingly, companies around the
world
 have been organizing themselves to hire
people
 for working remotely.
Nevertheless
, for those
people
 who used to
work
 at offices, it will be a big change. So, employees will have to update some skills and adapt to
this
 new
world
. In my opinion, remote
work
 will help the environment, city traffic, quality of life, and pleasure. To commence, since the Covid pandemic hit our
world
 companies and
people
 needed to change their lives for trying something new, even for those who were resistant, because the only way to keep in touch was by technology.
For instance
, an article written by BBC Brazil presents some data about two initiatives, which shows the increasing number of remote workers, and the decreasing number of pollution. In my view point, it has been happing only for one reason, the fewest cars on the streets and
people
 become conscious.
Secondly
, of course, there are many jobs where is impossible to
work
 remotely. So. it has no problem because analogical jobs should keep going as well.
Consequently
, those
people
 who need to drive from home to
work
 realized the quality of traffic in the new digital
world
 happens.
According to
 the Infrastructure Service in Brazil, a study made by Harvard University brings up to humanity that the
world
 has 30% fewer vehicles on street. To be honest, those who live in Sao Paulo or Rio de Janeiro go to
work
 and back home are more comfortable. In conclusion, I spent my whole essay time only talking about the advantages. In fact, I really believe, the period after the pandemic shows us the big opportunity that society has to become the globe healthy and light.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • flexibility
  • commuting time
  • productivity
  • focus
  • work-life balance
  • stress
  • distractions
  • global talent pool
  • environmental benefits
  • cost savings
  • face-to-face interaction
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • work and personal life separation
  • dependence on technology
  • internet connection
  • collaboration
  • communication
  • career growth
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