The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

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The two maps give information on the transformation of an

island

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, before and after changes were made .

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, it is observed, that before construction, there were no structures,and the

island

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was filled with just trees, but afterwords facilities were introduced to make it habitable.

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, before changes were made, the

island

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was surrounded in the north and south by the sea,and there is a footpath leading to the beach, and the inner part was filled with trees. After construction,

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,still surrounded by the sea, there is a pier built on the northern side of the

island

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, a beach by the east which is used for swimming by tourists. There are different residential buildings, some close to the beach separated by some trees and the rest accommodations are located just after the reception which is in the middle of the

island

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a restaurant has

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, been built.

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there was just a foot link before construction, there is now a vehicle path which makes it easier to access

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

170 words

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree. Give examples for your answers.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.