The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The two maps give information on the transformation of an
island
, before and after changes were made . Overall
, it is observed, that before construction, there were no structures,and the island
was filled with just trees, but afterwords facilities were introduced to make it habitable.
To begin
, before changes were made, the island
was surrounded in the north and south by the sea,and there is a footpath leading to the beach, and the inner part was filled with trees.
After construction, although
,still surrounded by the sea, there is a pier built on the northern side of the island
, a beach by the east which is used for swimming by tourists. There are different residential buildings, some close to the beach separated by some trees and the rest accommodations are located just after the reception which is in the middle of the island
a restaurant has also
, been built. While
,
there was just a foot link before construction, there is now a vehicle path which makes it easier to accessRemove the comma
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