The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in

Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of the British who took future
education
either full-time or part-time categorized by gender during three different periods. It was measured in thousands of
people
.
Overall
, it can be seen that part-time
education
was far
more
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preferable to full-time
education
regardless of gender throughout the time frame.
To begin
, at the beginning of the
period
, between 1970 and 1971, part-time
education
for men had ten times more British than full-time
education
, at just one million
people
and around 100,000
people
respectively. The pattern of part-time
education
fluctuated over the following 20 years, dropping to less than 900,000
people
from 1980 to 1981, and
then
increasing slightly to approximately 900,000
people
.
In contrast
to males, there was a constant increase
of
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part-time
education
for females during the
period
. Moving on to full-time
education
, the pattern of both genders had a similar trend, with both increasing gradually.
However
, there were more men than women at the beginning of the
period
,
a
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the
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gap between them narrowed and eventually got equal
at the end
of the
period
, at approximately 250,000
people
.
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  • engaged in
  • distinct
  • categorizes
  • enrollment status
  • surpass
  • compared to
  • stability
  • increased significantly
  • equal number
  • gap
  • outnumber
  • decreased
  • part-time courses
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