Home Schooling has become very popular in recent years. However, most people still believe that attending schools is the best way to obtain formal education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of home-schooling?

These days, there is an increasing trend in home-schooling. Some people think
this
trend is not desirable because of
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disadvantage
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to it.
However
, I firmly believe its advantages outweigh a con. On the one hand, by taking classes at home,
children
have fewer chances to interact with peers. Since school is a small society, students can learn social
skilles
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skills
while
hanging out or working with their friends.
However
, minors, who take an
education
based
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manner, spend less time with their friends,
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social experience.
Moreover
, they are more likely to study alone, without competing or cooperating.
For example
, employees who experienced home-schooling in childhood report some difficulties when they progress in a team project.
This
is because they do not know how to adjust
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different opinions.
Nevertheless
, juveniles can get a suitable
education
due to
home-schooling. Every student has different levels of abilities.
Thus
, if they get the same
education
at school, some can follow and comprehend easily, but others cannot
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.
However
, if
children
take home-schooling,
teachers
will observe their own students and try to match with them.
According to
a recent survey, each home-schooling
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has different classes based on their understanding speed.
Furthermore
, people can get more number of professions.
This
is because a number of
teachers
are needed to realize home-schooling.
For instance
, if
children
are taught at school, just a few
teachers
for each class are required.
However
, much more
teachers
should be recruited to teach each
students
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as home-schooling. In conclusion, a changing trend in the method of
education
indicates home-schooling. Even though it has a limitation related to building social abilities, there are more pros
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Thus
, it is a more advantageous
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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