Home Schooling has become very popular in recent years. However, most people still believe that attending schools is the best way to obtain formal education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of home-schooling?
These days, there is an increasing trend in home-schooling. Some people think
this
trend is not desirable because of a
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its
disadvantage
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disadvantages
However
, I firmly believe its advantages outweigh a con.
On the one hand, by taking classes at home, children
have fewer chances to interact with peers. Since school is a small society, students can learn social skilles
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skills
while
hanging out or working with their friends. However
, minors, who take an education
based on
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in
this
manner, spend less time with their friends, lacking
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and lacking
the
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Moreover
, they are more likely to study alone, without competing or cooperating. For example
, employees who experienced home-schooling in childhood report some difficulties when they progress in a team project. This
is because they do not know how to adjust several
different opinions.
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Nevertheless
, juveniles can get a suitable education
due to
home-schooling. Every student has different levels of abilities. Thus
, if they get the same education
at school, some can follow and comprehend easily, but others cannot do
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However
, if children
take home-schooling, teachers
will observe their own students and try to match with them. According to
a recent survey, each home-schooling children
has different classes based on their understanding speed. Fix the agreement mistake
child
Furthermore
, people can get more number of professions. This
is because a number of teachers
are needed to realize home-schooling. For instance
, if children
are taught at school, just a few teachers
for each class are required. However
, much more teachers
should be recruited to teach each students
as home-schooling.
In conclusion, a changing trend in the method of Change to a singular noun
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education
indicates home-schooling. Even though it has a limitation related to building social abilities, there are more pros of
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Thus
, it is a more advantageous situations
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...