Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is a controversy about which
people
should design
the new buildings
. Some people
think that the government
should take on this
task. However
, others believe that people
who invest their money
should do this
, which is the same opinion as me.
On the one
hand, building in one
city should be harmonious. However
, if the government
let each investor design
their buildings
, those things will be hard to see as the same units, losing balance. Then
, people
will be reluctant to live there because, generally, people
want to habit in beautiful places. This
situation is not desirable to improve a city. According to
a report in Korea, experts evaluated that the building units designed by the government
were more harmonious than other ones designed by many companies.
Nevertheless
, it is not good to develop big cities
. It is true that tax revenues are not enough to develop all cities
, needing to get investments from businessmen. However
, if the government
limit the design
of new buildings
, no one
will spend their money
to develop those places. For instance
, people
want to represent that they invest their money
to construct new buildings
through designs. However
, if the administration limits it, they will think it is a waste of money
. In addition
, if the government
only engage in designing the constructions, they will be similar without unique features. In contrast
, with many people
participating in it, cities
will be more unique. Studies have shown that even though people
progressed in the same project, a team's result was more attractive than an individual's one
.
In conclusion, big cities
cannot enhance without others' investment. Thus
, it is essential to let individuals design
something to attract them to pour their money
into constructing new ones. Furthermore
, cities
will be various based on their results.Submitted by eunbi_0915 on
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