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International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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Nowadays, international
tourism
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 is growing from year to year and has already become one of the biggest worldwide industries. Like every big business, there are both benefits and troubles. In
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 essay, both sides will be discussed.
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 with, it is a common belief that one of the main benefits is that the international travelling industry can generate significant incomes which brings prosperity and development to the host country.
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, these incomes could be used to develop infrastructure and transportation for the residents and travellers.
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, the
tourism
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 industry creates thousands of jobs in many different places, especially in rural areas which
improves
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 the local economy.
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, there is a popular type of accommodation when some locals share their houses with tourists, and some of them tend to sell traditional products and local foods.
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 reason, local residents will earn money from these industries. On the other side, drawbacks of international travel
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 exist, and first of all, the most dramatic issue from
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 the pollution of air, water and soil. Thousands of people come to visit the small area at the same time and bring a lot of trash and waste into
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 place.
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, consuming fuels destructively impact the environment
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 the increasing amount of transportation.
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, the carbon footprint has a negative influence on coral reefs near tropical islands and many of them already died by reason of contamination. In conclusion, in the modern world international
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 helps to survive for many countries, the economy of which consists of incomes from
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, and of course for these countries benefits outweigh the drawbacks, despite that it could cause environmental problems in the near future. The governments should take
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 issue seriously,
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, international
tourism
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 has a risk to have more cons than pros.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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