You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference. Describe what this conference is about  Why you want him/her to give a presentation  Give details about the conference

Dear Kate, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am organizing a meeting for our company and it is going to be held on next month. I am requesting you to give a presentation
in
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the meeting.
Firstly
, I would like to inform
more
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you more
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about the
conference
. The
conference
is based on
employee's
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employees'
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past experiences and what they have learned since they entered
in
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the company. All employees are going to talk about their mistakes and how they solved
it
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them
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.
Secondly
, the reason why I am encouraging you to give
presentation
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a presentation
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is that you will improve your communication skills. I know you have enough technical knowledge but I would like to improve your speaking skills.
Therefore
, you will able to manage customer calls individually.
Lastly
, the
conference
will
held
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in our company's meeting room and the
timing
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of the
conference
is 10.00 AM to 5.00 PM with
one hour
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lunch break. So, I hope you will accept my invitation. If you need any
further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Best regards, Milav Soni
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