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Writing task : Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today, everything should be done online. Do you agree or disagree

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Giving
lectures
 online increased rapidly when covid hit and many countries were forced to be under lockdown. Some
students
 enjoyed
this
 new way of conducting lessons and argued everything should be done online.
However
, others still preferred the old-school way of teaching. In my opinion, I disagree that teaching should be completely remote. The world first started online
lectures
 when there was a pandemic and we were forced to be in the safety of our homes. At
first,
many
students
 were thrilled to be attending school from the comfort of their homes, some would say it was a dream come true,
although
 soon enough many were starting to fall behind on classes and assignments. It was hard for teachers,especially older teachers, to cope with these sudden changes as well.
Moreover
,
students
 were not making things easier for
them
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.
For example
, some will not turn on their videos or they might be sleeping rather than listening to the lessons.
Hence
,
students
 were taking advantage of the situation. When
lectures
 were done
face
 to
face
, the
lectures
 could be more involved with the
students
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student's
students'
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 needs and wants. A teacher could know if the student is struggling or falling behind.
Students
 could
also
 meet their teachers after class and ask them questions and get a proper explanation as opposed to waiting for an email and not understanding what the teacher is fully saying. In conclusion, there are both pros and cons when it comes to having
lectures
 online as compared to
face to
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face
.
However
, the pros outweigh the cons.
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