In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?

In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task.

However

, it is believed to be a hobby nowadays. In my opinion,

while

I agree that

this

is a positive tendency, I

also

think that

this

has some drawbacks. Advocates of

this

idea base their ground on the fact that spending

time

on

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shopping helps

people

reduce

stresses

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. To be specific, if a student studies a lot, he needs some physical exercises in order to not be under pressure. When he goes shopping, it means he can walk around and their eyes don’t concentrate on one thing until he finds the suitable thing. During that

time

,

people

will have

ability

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to relax and spend

time

doing what they really like.

On the other hand

, if

people

do shopping so much, they will lack

time

for other activities. It is illustrated by the fact that if a housewife just worries about shopping, she will not have enough

time

to take care

her

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family. Because of

this

, there might be some arguments that happen unexpectedly.

Moreover

, if the officers focus on shopping, they just think about what to buy and the

time

has a special discount.

As a result

, officers will not pay

their

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attention to the work as long as their

favorite

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things with a suitable price are in their pocket. All in all, it is obvious that shopping

becomes

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a hobby is not a big problem if

people

can balance

between

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their

time

for work and their

time

for relaxing in a reasonable way.