The charts show the main methods of transport of people traveling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart illustrates

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information about how people commuted to a particular

univeysity

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university

in 2004 and 2009.

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, cars were selected by the majority of people in 2004.

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, buses became dominant in 2009.

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, cars were selected by the majority of commuters to the university as a means

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in 2004, 51%. Though, the

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of car users reduced to 28% in 2009 and became the second largest section. Moving onto the next section  of

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, it was responsible for 33% of the chart in 2004.

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, there was a significant increase of 13% in the bus section in 2009. As for the part of

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bicycle

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, the figures amounted to just 9% in 2004.

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the number of commuters who prefer bikes  accounted for 16% in 2009. In terms of walking, in 2004 only 4 % of the chart belonged  to

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unit,

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6 % in 2009. 

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, travelling by train was

choosen

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chosen

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of people in both 2004 and 2009, comprising 3 and 4 % respectively.