The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
This
line chart illustrates the
consumption
of different types of animal-based protein sources in a specific European territory. To add up,
this
graph conveys
this
evolution from 1979 to 2004 and is measured in grams per person per week.
Overall
, I can clearly observe three different trends. Chicken meals had skyrocketed
while
beef and lamb ones had been
steadly
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steadily
decreasing. Concerning fish
consumption
,
this
downside trend had been slightly stabilised from 1984 to 2004. Indeed, the upward trend in chicken buyings had been impressive. It
had
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reached an all-time peak in 2004 (250 grams per person per week) coming from less than 150 grams per person per week in 1979. It represented nearly a 100% increase in only 25 years.
However
, the downside had been suffered
by
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beef and lamb whose
consumption
had plummeted more than 50% in the same period. When it comes to fish, the evolution is less
agressive
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aggressive
. Rather than moving in a precise direction, fish
consumption
had, at
first,
decreased and reached a plateau since 1984.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • meat
  • increase
  • decrease
  • popularity
  • steady
  • stable
  • significant
  • period
  • type
  • contrast
  • decline
  • greatest
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