The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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the pie charts illustrate the
amount
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of three
substance
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substances
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in our daily
meal
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meals
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which might inappropriate for us if we consume them more than usual.
sodium
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is the first item
that
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apply
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illustrated by
chart
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the chart
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.
according to
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statistics
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,statistics
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there is 43%
sodium
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at
dinner
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that
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which
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is
maximum
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the maximum
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amount
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. both
of
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apply
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breakfast
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and
snacks
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contain
a
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the
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same percentage of
this
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nutrient
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that
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which
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is 14%. lunch consists
double
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of double
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sodium
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in comparison with
breakfast
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and
snacks
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.
beside
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besides
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this
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, saturated fat forms 37% of
dinner
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and there is a constant
amount
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of it in both
snacks
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and
breakfast
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that
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which
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is 21% and 26%. the minimum
amount
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of it
is
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apply
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in the lunch
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that
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which
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is 16%. the maximum of added sugar
is
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apply
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in
snacks
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and in both
breakfast
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and lunch is approximately
a
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the
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same
amount
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that
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which
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is 16 and 19
percent
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per cent
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.
dinner
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consists of 23 % of
this
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kind of
nutrients
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nutrient
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.
overall
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pie charts show us that the high levels of
sodium
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is
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are
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at
dinner
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while
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the maximum of saturated fat and added sugar are in
dinner
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and
snacks
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.
in contrast
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the minimum of
sodium
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and saturated fat and added sugar are in
breakfast
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sodium, dinner, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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