The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
the pie charts illustrate the
amount
of three Use synonyms
substance
in our daily Fix the agreement mistake
substances
meal
which might inappropriate for us if we consume them more than usual.
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meals
sodium
is the first item Use synonyms
that
illustrated by Correct pronoun usage
apply
chart
. Add an article
the chart
according to
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statistics
there is 43% Add a comma
,statistics
sodium
at Use synonyms
dinner
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Linking Words
that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
maximum
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the maximum
amount
. both Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
contain Use synonyms
a
same percentage of Correct article usage
the
this
nutrient Linking Words
Linking Words
that
is 14%. lunch consists Correct pronoun usage
which
double
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of double
sodium
in comparison with Use synonyms
breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
.
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beside
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besides
this
, saturated fat forms 37% of Linking Words
dinner
and there is a constant Use synonyms
amount
of it in both Use synonyms
snacks
and Use synonyms
breakfast
Use synonyms
Linking Words
that
is 21% and 26%. the minimum Correct pronoun usage
which
amount
of it Use synonyms
is
in the lunch Unnecessary verb
apply
Linking Words
that
is 16%.
the maximum of added sugar Correct pronoun usage
which
is
in Unnecessary verb
apply
snacks
and in both Use synonyms
breakfast
and lunch is approximately Use synonyms
a
same Correct article usage
the
amount
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Linking Words
that
is 16 and 19 Correct pronoun usage
which
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
dinner
consists of 23 % of Use synonyms
this
kind of Linking Words
nutrients
.
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nutrient
overall
pie charts show us that the high levels of Linking Words
sodium
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is
at Change the verb form
are
dinner
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while
the maximum of saturated fat and added sugar are in Linking Words
dinner
and Use synonyms
snacks
. Use synonyms
in contrast
the minimum of Linking Words
sodium
and saturated fat and added sugar are in Use synonyms
breakfast
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sodium, dinner, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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